NosirahFreedman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Iphone 666]

Awesome animation! Even though I didn't like the writing that much, the visual gags were more than enough to be funny.

MrChambers responds:

Thanks, yea I really need to work on my writing

[Elf]

Your animation is well done, but has no power behind the motions. Add some anticipation and follow-through.

Ghosty22 responds:

I try to use anticipation, but it never seems to come out right.

[Donkey Kong Goes Bananas!]

Competent but not funny. There's a saying called, "Don't call a dog a dog."

JumpNJetz responds:

that hurt my poor little heart

[Dead Project]

Beautiful animation and sound! The backgrounds are also absolutely fantastic. I wish I could see them done though... maybe some other time?

mariankiller responds:

thanks .i'm working on another project so will see....:)

[Bad Dog!]

No lipsync, little animation, and a poop joke... *sigh*

Donkeyhorse responds:

Without lipsync and with poop humor, still better than your stuff, blam! Thanks for the feedback.

[Anime Amigos 2: Anime Con]

I'm loving your style, especially the painted backgrounds. The biggest issue is your sound design. There have been many times in which I haven't been able to hear dialogue as well as times in which the long periods of silence with faint music that should have been louder. Overall, good job! Looking forward to the next one!

RyanStorm responds:

I mostly agree. I feel sound design dialogue wise, the first line of dialogue should set the standard for how high the volume on your speakers should be. That said I will work on that, as it's enough of a problem that people have actually addressed it to me.
Music wise, I agree. I feel like the moments of silence should've prompted a raised audio level on the music.
Glad you liked it and sorry for the late response!

[A Bag of Cats Ate my Face]

The absurdist humor wasn't absurd enough, the animation was lazy, and you resorted to swearing only to get a cheap laugh.

It was competent, but not good. Maybe next time.

CyanSandwich responds:

Maybe next time.

[How To Get A Date On Vday]

Great writing, gread delivery, great visual gags! Keep it up!

SnowBacon responds:

Thank you and I will! XD

[We Are Witches - Prologue]

Cool style and nice motion graphic! Can't wait to see it fully animated!

Skatoonist responds:

Thanks!! for the feedback! :D

[Next Quest - Bards]

Very cute! Reminds me of the campyness of when I first discovered Newgrounds. I only have a couple suggestions to make it better:
-Better voice acting
-More frames of animation

Other than that, the short was very charming! You have potential to be a solid series. Keep at it!

mattyburrito responds:

Thanks for the comment and critique!

Will keep working on the minimalist style and acting!