NosirahFreedman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My JonTron Animated]

You're trying way to hard on this one. Try toning back the blue and sticking with organic visual gags instead of forced ones.

nags responds:

what? of course im going to try, i didnt feel like anything was forced? what was forced here? and also too*

[Against The Evils-Part 1]

Cute for what it is. I assume you're young, so I'll go easy on you. Start by keeping a proper aspect ratio throughout the piece. There is no reason why I should see white bars. Your animation is competent, but nothing special, especially since the sprites aren't made by you. Lastly the story... um... you'll improve with time.

Jerry589 responds:

Thank you for your encouragement. I am trying to improve it and working hard. :) I have edited it to the real size. :)